All Comments on 'Mystery Fitness Model Ch. 04'

by rambo89

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BruceWoBruceWoabout 2 years ago

Best story on Literotica. Would give it 10 stars.

MarassoMarassoabout 2 years ago

Yey, another part, so nice! I absolutely love that story, it hit all my sweet spots, so five stars as always :)

I really appreciate your effort in detailed descriptions of Rachel's body and her and Tim's training, this is something I like, both to read and write about. It’s very realistic, so I guess you have your own experience at the gym.

And this scene with abs punching, hot and kinky at the same time.

So, I understand that part with a boat you mentioned in the comment below the previous chapter will be the next?

rambo89rambo89about 2 years agoAuthor

@Marasso: yep, a day on the boat will be Part 5. Was going to be Part 4 but I got carried away.

MarassoMarassoabout 2 years ago

@Rambo89 good that you got carried away, that means more for us to read ;) Keep up the good work!

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