All Comments on 'Nadia's Tale Ch. 01'

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hisangelbeautyhisangelbeautyover 13 years ago
Damn!!!

okay you have to update this fast and make the next part longer, damn cliffhangers just as it gets good lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love it!!

Love it. Please update as soon as possible.

I can't believe that Derek shot Stacey.

Don't leave us hanging for long.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
No no no

too damn short!! but im loving it so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Start!!

I hope he gets his ass beat. I hate men that hit women. But I am loving the story so far. Update soon!!

DeckviewDeckviewover 13 years ago
Wonderful start

Let's see where this one is going!

honeybreehoneybreeover 13 years ago
Well damn...this story is good!

This story has a wonderful start that carried through to the end of the chapter, wish it was a bit longer but so far so good! I can't wait to see what happens next...*grabs popcorn and sits at computer waiting for update* Keep up the good work!

lili82lili82over 13 years ago
oh, my!!!!!

nice set up! i'm anxious for the next chapter. keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
you so got my attention

don't leave it for another 2yrs before u come back :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
I agree with the other posts

Great start to the story. I was stunned that he shot her in the back. What a coward he is. Hopefully, she will survive and be able to meet the cute guy that has come to her rescue. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
With a start like that...

I hope you won't leave your obviously, totally interested readers hanging (certainly not for two years, as another reader commented) and that we'll get to enjoy another installment soon. Just awesome! I can't wait to see what happens for Nadia and the newcomer... and Derek had better get what's coming to him soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow!

Very different and very good. The scenario you gave us seems VERY realistic. I hope you continue with this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
what's next

That was really interesting and I hope u are going to continue this story I can honestly say it is not like anything I have ever read.

MSNJMSNJover 13 years ago
WHERE

Is the rest? Why are you waiting so long to post the next chapter? Something tells me your gonna be one of the many others on this site. Where you start and don't finish. I hope you prove me wrong.

ArieluArieluover 13 years ago
Please....

I can't wait for the next chapter.

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 13 years ago
It's On!

This happens in real life, the cheater becomes defensive and angry at being caught. I love how she finally realized her true worth, and decided to take a stand.

More is needed from this story!

Avidreader99Avidreader99almost 13 years ago
OMG this is hilarous

Ex crazy azz hell, LOL Good chapter, I'm hooked I luv that part when she says He's cute, I'm single and dying LOL

IndianPrincess2IndianPrincess2almost 13 years ago
WOW

I hope you plan on finishing this story its getting good my goodness what a lunatic he is please update soon thanks!!

ariesgirlariesgirlover 11 years ago

Interesting story...she was even joking right up till she passed out. Too bad we were left hanging.

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