All Comments on 'NAFIR 01'

Ahhh I want to keep reading, but it's not written yet!

Thanks for the chapter! Looking forward for more.

Great start! Endless possibilities and potential storylines in a high school with monster girls. Keep writing. This story has heart. We want more!

This is a great start I hope you continue with this.

Very nice chapter, it was a nice plot. I'm hyped for the next progression...

This is a fantastic start, I can't wait to see what happens next. The pacing was perfect and really set things up for future chapters well.

OK. There are immediate options, long term options, and at least a dozen potential storylines I can see branching off from this first chapter. This gives us, as readers, a lot of hope.

Looking very much forward to the next chapter.

would love to read more of this Story

Where did you go to school? Where I'm from recess is only for elementary school students

Good opening

more please, this has the makings of a good story.

I definitely need a lot more chapters of this 😊👍.