All Comments on 'Naive Diah and the Old Perverts'

That alone should have meant this should have been in NonConsent/Reluctance.

I wonder what that leaves most of the readers on this site

Just why? This makes no sense at all.

I'm going to guess English isn't your first language. You literally make simple grammar mistakes left and right. I'm not sure a great editor could save this mess. Add that to the fact that you're in the wrong category. These people are boyfriend and girlfriend NOT husband and wife. Why are you in the LOVING WIVES category? Then you want us to believe he didn't go straight to the police? He's been kidnapped, assaulted and abused. You really think he's going to believe the first random person that comes out of the building? That Diah (bad name btw) doesn't know who the people were? Since they were stupid enough to take pictures and use a gun, when found, they will be spending the remainder of their days in prison. This was poorly written and badly thought out. AND it was completely unfinished.

1 star

Unerotic

... and yes, it was clearly written by someone, who isn't a native English speaker, but you Anonymous cowards make me sick, We NEVER see your stories. You just moan!

This story has some very hot scenes. 5 stars.

You don't owe her anything, including a place to stay, now that she is leaving....one way or another, her choice.... easy or difficult.

Great story - but please never use "hehe" as evil, diabolical laughter!