All Comments on 'Naive Housewives Are Led Astray Ch. 04'

by LordRamsay

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant.

Loved the way you allowed Sandra's character to develop and how she was "forced" to take those big, black cocks.

Hopefully we will see more of her in coming chapters.

Keep it up!

duanepduanepabout 16 years ago
great

Hi I like the series only wish my writing was a good as yours. DuaneP

duanepduanepabout 16 years ago
great

Hi I like the series only wish my writing was a good as yours. DuaneP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Sandras initiation

I have several delicious scenarios ....praying to our lord while holding hand ...may be? Please make Sandras baptism and anointing long and salivating.. and make it soon..this is great...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
delayed

at some point the debautchery will be discovered or they will simply tire of her; in any case, she ends up out, and let the men take care of her (whether they are black, white whatever)

breezer1breezer1almost 14 years ago
why????

no offence m8 but i really wish u haqd finished this better than ur later ivory club stories

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
ADD SOME REVENGE....VIDEO TO HER FAMILY...NO DIVORCE.....

HIRE SOMEONE TO DO A NUMBER ON THE BLACKS...GAY WHORES?..

HAVE ALL THEIR TEETH REMOVED.....ANIMAL SEX......SEX WITH VICTORIA AFTER GAYS...HAVE HER LICK THEIR ASSES CLEAN AND THEN KISS THEM ON THE MOUTH...FILM EVERYTHING.....THEN DIVORCE HER.

cal6009cal6009over 13 years ago
OMG!!!

White guilt is like being on drugs!!!

White people will read any racist dribble presented to them.

What the HELL is wrong with you people. This and related stories are an insult to intellegence and reasoning.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
LIKE IT

Like the story, but would like to some additional chapters and a finish to it, too...Any chance???

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
WOW

Great plot and hope you are working on addditional chapters as promised. good writing as usual and look forward following the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
GREAT

Great serie and looking forward to additional chapters please......

jodiredjodiredabout 13 years ago
addiction to Black

these women are clearly addicted to Black Cock, which is not just a matter of fiction but is quite real. i have described my own addiction to Black cock to my Sex Addicts support group on occasion and several other white women in the group have chimed in on their own addiction. it seems to be happening to more and more white women, especially married white women.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Dumb ass author can't finish this because he finally realizes that black women are more attracted to white men than white women being attracted to black men, because white men have more going for them. They realize that white men work harder, earn more money and treat thier women better than black men. For instance, white men do not turn thier women into whores earning money for them so they can sit on thier asses collecting welfare like black men do

MovieMikeMovieMikealmost 13 years ago
Excellent

Can't wait for more. Dying to see Victoria and Sandra getting it on together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great story!

Looking forward to Ch. 05!

busty_jessica_2busty_jessica_2about 12 years ago
loving it

Loving the whole ivory club serie.... lately espyrcially the naive houswive and how she loves getting abused whiledc her hibby is on the pine... a personal secret fantasy of mine...

Yave tried to reach you to see if i could qualify as a candidaet for the club? But your pms seems to bec off...please mail me at busty.jessica.bj at gmail.com

Ps also loved how they decifded to clean her face earlier.... so nasty but sooo hot!

Xxx

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Need a new chapter

Well written but we need a new chapter, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I'M HISPANIC HUNK 41758

I HAVE READ MANY STORIES ON THIS SITE ABOUT BIG BLACK WELL HUNG MEN FUCKIN WHITE WIFES AND CUCKOLDING THEIR HUSBANDS WELL IN REAL LIFE THATS BULLSHIT FIRST I GOT A BIGGER DICK THAN ALL OFF THEM AND SECOND THEY ALL THINK THEY CAN INTIMIDATE YOU WITH THEIR BIG MOUTH BUT WHEN YOU CUT ONE OF THEM THEY ALL RUN YES THERE ALL PUSSYES

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Chap. 5

Have the bro.'s 'pimp' her out some..to sort of test her. New whore clothes, maybe add a 'tatoo'..Then have her meet Charles, maybe make a few films

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
sometimes less is more

Please don't continue its way overlong already

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
There are so many more situations to titilate the reader..... Don't stop

make the wives pleasure black women, make them escorts for black females as white pets.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hi

U never finished Victoria becomes a whore for black cock u just stopped on Thursday

taxi1963taxi1963almost 10 years ago
when well finish store?

pleae let kowe

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
what a wonderful little prison fantasy you have written

now i know why you stopped writing. a white husband found out about how you were raping his wife and had you sent to prison after castrating you where you can be a hero to all the black serial rapists there.............. when they aren't buggering your sissy ass!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved it

Please continue this story it can't end here. I love your writing style. The slow paced seduction is amazing and all the dirty talk makes it so hot. I really hope you finish the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please continue ...

... and finish this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really hot

You should keep writing!!!!!

RodimusMikeRodimusMikeover 4 years ago
Victoria sounds like the perfect whore.

When you consider Victoria being sexually awakened by Huge Black Cocks and learn to crave it more than anything then knowingly sucking Amos's cock while he's talking to Victoria's Husband on the phone giving a world class blowjob and having him cum down her throat and know her Husband is talking to Amos just fills her with such joy to know she is cheating on her husband is just mindblowingly fantastic,not because she doesn't love her husband but cause Victoria has come to accept she is and always will be a Big Black Cock Whore and lives to have Amos and others fill all 3 of Victoria's holes,like a Good Whore Should.

In society now-a-days it has become normal for people to just fuck total strangers as long as they find them appealing,and people return to their base instincts like wild animals who basically feel the need to have as much sex as possible.So for Victoria and her husband James I don't feel Victoria loves him any less just because she has sex with Amos,she just wants his cock in her holes,and then at the end of the day Victoria returns home to the man she truly loves,namely James which Amos can't give Victoria.So I hope Victoria,James,& Amos can all secretly live happily ever after.

theOne666theOne6669 months ago

I can't believe I'm the only one to bring this up? I also have many stories listed here and everywhere else. So please believe me when I say this is just constructive remarks. Not even criticism. But again, no one else mentioned this so...This story could have been spectacular if you told one story at a time. Right when Im getting into your bade characters(husband, lawyer and Victoria) you 2 0r 3 times start to describe what people are seeing on screen. And its not a mention of the action, its in-depth details that the reader doesn't give a crap about. Im interested in the primary 3 which are all but left out for what seems like hours. I understand you're trying to build up the character of this religious vomit Sandra but give her a story of her own. So... it seems your done at 4 and I was dying to read how the lawyer finally got his. And where the cuck falls all in. Loved the gardeners too, tho the layer should have got his, then the gardeners. Too much of a coincidence that she's looking at a video and it's RelifiousVomit. That's a song by the Dead Kennedys. Rocks, Keep up the good work.

ehppmsehppms8 months ago

I have to agree with theone666 far to much irrelevant details. I think the storyline is great, but you seem to take an age to get to the action. I've noticed this in all your other stories. I also agree with theOne666 I would like to see the finish of this storyline.....so please give us the last chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Lame. Get some self respect James. Nuke the marriage. Invoke the prenuptial. Let her live off the land or on her back with the gardeners. Just dumb.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Me encantó ❤️🍑

todo los 4 relatos lástima que no siguió con más

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