by HStoner
Wonderful story! I expected nothing less, and I look forward to reading the next chapter!
Awesome story with a lot of opportunities to make it a long series. Got to get Keith and Sheila involved and of course, get Chelsea to join them. Ready for part 2!
Typically great read by you. Thank you and please get ch 2 released for us!
This was the best story that I've read in a while. Lots of potential for future expansion too. Thanks for sharing.
It’s quite amazing that something that seems to be so unique can be similar in so many ways to aspects of the unique and personal stories of others, whether fantasy or real! I read with great pleasure!
Pity that the main character haven't took Chelsea. Good story none-the-less.