All Comments on 'Nanny to Teach Ch. 12'

by Sir VIRGO

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goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
i've really liked this story

even though each chapter is very short - they're hot. but not this one. short - and not too hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wow

omg.. You are unbelievable.. Please add more chapters...

Jena12Jena12over 16 years ago
names

The story was fabulous and I want more of these wonderful people - but please be careful with the NAMES - dont get them mixed up - thank you for a very erotic journey

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nanny and associated family

You certainly know how to spin an intensely captivating story. Your spelling and punctuation are very good.

However, you tend to forget which character you are talking about. Somewhat distracting, but not terribly so. Have you ever thought about asking someone to edit your narratives?

Only a suggestion, otherwise very interesting/ erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
its a superb

pitslease write nanny chapter 13...14...15 etc soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I want to hear more about this family!

This family is so sexy amd I want the stories to continue.

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