by Sir VIRGO
even though each chapter is very short - they're hot. but not this one. short - and not too hot.
The story was fabulous and I want more of these wonderful people - but please be careful with the NAMES - dont get them mixed up - thank you for a very erotic journey
You certainly know how to spin an intensely captivating story. Your spelling and punctuation are very good.
However, you tend to forget which character you are talking about. Somewhat distracting, but not terribly so. Have you ever thought about asking someone to edit your narratives?
Only a suggestion, otherwise very interesting/ erotic.
This family is so sexy amd I want the stories to continue.