All Comments on 'Naomi's Story'

So unexpected! I didn't twig for a few minutes, but then got the referral to the back story. I liked this one a lot... Thanks!

Very good sequel. Very touching. 5stars

A very good sequel. Touching in all the right places.

Nice sequel but felt like the timeline was too long. What made Andy change so much? Was Naomi celibate from the day by the pool until remarried to Andy? I would have liked to know she was.

Loved this finish. 5⭐️

Forgiveness…..redemption……love…..what’s not to like? 5 stars.

Good follow up to the first story!

5

I didn’t see this ending coming, but loved it. Excellent writing!!!

Very good view of the other side, and coda

'nuff said

Wow, what a way to reward a narcissistic sociopath. "Have you thought about what your suicide would have done to us?" OF COURSE NOT. The bitch NEVER cared about anyone but herself. Even her regrets about Andy were LITERALLY all about how he was perfect for what he offered her. Of COURSE this author decided that having Andy take the cheating backstabbing psycho back is the good idea, he's the suicidal one, not her. Didn't think you could screw up worse than chapter one; this sequel shows I was wrong.