All Comments on 'Natalie is a Work of Art Pt. 01'

I really loved reading this.

Most enjoyable, though difficult to believe Natalie wouldn't have figured out that the caller was her mentor. I'd be happy for it to end here, as you've probably taken this story line as far as it can go.

Interesting that my kids' high school had one teacher who really pushed the limits on skirt length, sheer tops etc. Consensus was she only got away with it because she was in the art department!

I'd like to see what else you have in store for her!

Really exciting story, love the detail from how she looked, to those sky blue heels. Definitely want to hear more.

Great job

I would have given it five stars had it been possible. I won't make suggestions because I was slow to discover it and the sequel is already posted! I'm glad I'm following you because so far I've never been disappointed. -- JB

H.O.T.

Hell, that's about all I can say.

Loved it it was really smokin' hot!!!