All Comments on 'Natalie is a Work of Art Pt. 02'

if I said I enjoyed stroking myself to this one would you be honored?

great story

What a HOT first two chapters!!! I can't wait to see if Matt has his way with Natalie.

I really enjoy your stories! I'm wondering if you make yourself horny while your writing?

Is it like edging yourself?

Shehasnicebutt2

Anyway, five virtual stars for this chapter, too. The second chapter is always harder to write and still be hot, and we all knew what was going to happen, but the twist with Matt at the end was delicious. How about Matt blackmails the teacher/mentor who is abusing his power into edging Natalie and then walking away while Matt enters the picture? Then Natalie will learn her most secret desire (secret even to herself!) of seducing a student while the teacher/mentor is forced enviously to watch the young stud take Natalie.

By the way, I find it impressive that you play both male narrator and omniscient narrator simultaneously, and it seems to work! Wow. -- JB

JBEdwards - Thank you baby. I really am enjoying turning people on with my stories, and you've been very sweet to me about all of them. I like your idea for a future chapter, its got my wheels turning. :)

Shehasnicebutt2 - YES! I get REALLY turned on when I'm writing because I love to see myself as the girl in each story. Also, I absolutely love edging myself while writing. It helps to keep me in a constant state of arousal so I can come up with some really sexy ideas for the story.

xoxo

Daphne

Which of your stories would you most want to be the girl in?

Oooooooo, what a titillating question...well I wouldn't want it to actually happen in real life, but the person I always get turned on the most by pretending to be is Renee from the "Ravishing Renee" story. I've probably run that scenario in my mind hundreds of times while pleasuring myself, and some of my strongest climaxes have come from re-reading that story and picturing myself as Renee. What a great question. xoxo - Daphne

There are some lovely ideas in this story. Yummy

@JBEdwards - yeah, the ability to turn off scoring is really annoying. the trick is to go into the story and see the tags, then find the least common tag to quickly find the story in a list of highest to lowest scores, then you'll have a good idea of how good the story is.

this is a decent series so far, but i won't read anything else from this author unless i stumble across it in a search, just like this series, purely due to the lack of scoring. why waste time on something the author doesn't think is that good, unless it has been vouched for already? with thousands of stories out there that have great scores already?

@dasgoodshit - I think you've misunderstood my rationale. I turn off the ratings after the story is no longer labeled as "NEW" simply because I don't write my stories for ratings. Almost all of my stories were above 4.5 at the time the ratings were turned off, and you can tell that by looking at my story list with all the "HOT" tags. As of today, 55 out of my 60 stories have "HOT" tags.

Quick frankly though, if a reader has to look at a rating to decide if it's worth reading then I really don't put much credibility in their opinion. Every single story of mine represents my absolute best work. Every word is carefully considered, every character is meticulously created, and I am extremely proud of everything I submit. People certainly have the right to ignore my work if they wish, but rest assured, those people will miss out on some wonderful fantasies. I want people to like my work because they gave it a try and think its really good, not because they noticed that someone else thought it was good. Decide for yourself, and if you like it great. If not, move on, but please don't assume that my deactivating ratings in any way means I don't 100% stand behind my work. xoxo - Daphne

another smokin' hot story loved it. the teacher slut is most definitely turning into a major teacher slut putting her career on the line like that dayum, that takes some really big kahunas.Very creative writing!!!

@EM_Lockiel_51 - Awww thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Natalie has more coming to her in parts 3 and 4.

xoxo - Daphne.