All Comments on 'Nathan and Lainie Ch. 03'

I really enjoyed reading this story. It is very good. Please continue writing more chapters.

I'm loving it. I can see the potential for a parallel story developing here. Maybe Connie and her Dad. Then, maybe Connie and Nate. Maybe even Connie's dad and Lannie. Who knows, the possibilities are endless as well as intriguing.

Ben,

This story was fantastic, just wondering if you wrote any more chapters, I'd love to hear what happens next (and maybe with Connie!) Great work, thanks so much.

I just read all 3 chapters of Nathan and Lainie, and found myself wanting more. Please continue your exciting work with these characters.

Why did you not finish this disappointed ending.

UTTERLY BORING AND BANAL....