All Comments on 'Nathan and Lainie Ch. 03'

by Ben_Franklin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
DIRE SHITE

UTTERLY BORING AND BANAL....

OlebillOlebillover 7 years ago
Why

Why did you not finish this disappointed ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
3 Great offerings

I just read all 3 chapters of Nathan and Lainie, and found myself wanting more. Please continue your exciting work with these characters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Time to dust off the keyboard....

Ben,

This story was fantastic, just wondering if you wrote any more chapters, I'd love to hear what happens next (and maybe with Connie!) Great work, thanks so much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
KEEP GOING

I'm loving it. I can see the potential for a parallel story developing here. Maybe Connie and her Dad. Then, maybe Connie and Nate. Maybe even Connie's dad and Lannie. Who knows, the possibilities are endless as well as intriguing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Continue.

I really enjoyed reading this story. It is very good. Please continue writing more chapters.

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