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by kdwest

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WeBothDoWeBothDoalmost 8 years ago
Nice, but lacking clarity.

Lots of characters, but there's not a lot of clarity, right from the start. You can sort of figure out who's who and what's going on, but that effort distracts from the story.

Nonetheless - a good story and we hope to see more.

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