Natural Woman Pt. 01

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kdwest
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Pat chuckled and kissed her way up her throat to her ear. "We're here." His voice seemed to hum through her, meeting up with the edgeless flame of Mario's tongue, and Jessie was lost in the vibration, her whole body flooding with a feeling that was too big, too scary to be called pleasure. She felt herself lift off of the chair, so that her only points of contact with the world were the two men's mouths, which lifted her up — like the paper-bag hot-air balloons she'd made with Andy once — and let her fly.

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A/N: What do you think? Should I continue? (I've already got some more written!)

BTW, this is in the same "universe" as my story "The Visitor." :-)

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WeBothDoWeBothDoalmost 8 years ago
Nice, but lacking clarity.

Lots of characters, but there's not a lot of clarity, right from the start. You can sort of figure out who's who and what's going on, but that effort distracts from the story.

Nonetheless - a good story and we hope to see more.

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