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Anonymousover 6 years agoPerspective
You can't use 1st person perspective and bounce from charter to character as the narrator. Try putting this into third person perspective and it would be easier to read.
prop69over 6 years agoDisappointed boring finish
Rick is a SHITHEAD. Too bad she can't DUMP HIM.
NO EXCUSE FOR NOT CALLING HER.
TREATED HER LIKE CRAP
Anonymousover 6 years agoShallow Rick
Rick feel like a very shallow character. Marissa should move on. What happened to Nature Girl?
c4vetteman94about 6 years agoIts not shallow
To not like being lied too. She shouldn't have lied, there would be no reason for a lack of trust. Sister or not.
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