All Comments on 'Naughty Girl'

How many times are are going to try to get away with submitting the same story twice with a couple of name changes and a few minor changes in plot? You did it with "Sleep In" and "Sleep Over", and now with "Good Girl" and "Naughty Girl"? That's a load of bull.

If you want to write an incest story, then do it, but don't turn around a year later and submit the same story a second time with a few minor changes and insist you did it to be "mainstream". That's just pandering and being a lazy-ass writer. If you want to write a story two ways, fine, then decide which ONE you like best and want to post. But, don't give us the same BS twice.

I wish I could give this a zero-star rating for being essentially a duplicate of a previous story, but one-star is as low as I can give.

Thank you for providing a mainstream version!! Lovely story. Keep up the good work

I really liked it. It was sweet and lovely written with less crude words but still so so hot. I loved it!

Excellent, a well prepared, crafted and written story.