by Anonbitch22
Not bad. Could use an editor or at least a proof read before posting. Just some minor grammatical errors, nothing too bad that it took away fr the story though. The only issue I really had was I have a hard time when a story just uses spit, vaginal secretion or precum as an anal lubricant. I'm not saying it's not possible but it is definitely not the norm and it gives guys the false idea they can just pull out and jam it into their partners ass.