by Splikie
While your story was good I found the grammatical errors and bad spelling very distracting. Please find someone to proof your story before publishing. It will make it more enjoyable to read.
wonderful so true sounding, i know how she feels , she needs him so bad and he is hot for her also, i want to hear more she can never get enough now
i agree very real , most of us have been there maybe not with black , but at that time in our life it was so taboo, maybe still is, but we have learned how wonderfull it can be to have it.
iknow she will get more and more
For stupid people, if you nasty cunts need this to get off, thats pathic.