All Comments on 'Nefarious Stepmom Pt. 01'

A lovely start, and a hot story ... but please, Olivia should be "Mistress", not "Master".

I loved it, please continue this story!

There are a large number of women that identify as Master. It has been like thar for years. There is no "requirement" that a female identify as Mistress.

Amazing,go on on the father please

VERY GOOD FOR YOUR FIRST STORY, CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER

I liked your story it’s quite interesting keep up the great work!!!

Yeah - not too late for the Olivia to be addressed as Mistress, rather than Master... plus, I noticed Natasha was able to think for herself... for whatever was done to her kind of wore off - and that was good... to give the girl some avenue of potential escape adds to the hotness of the tale... but if I understand right, it's Heather... the younger sister who will end up being the heroine. If so... let's hope it isn't an easy battle... and when Natasha is somewhat rescued - maybe the best that could happen was for the docility and slave-like obedience Natasha has for Olivia is transferred to her younger sister, so she becomes the object of her lustful obsession. Just a thought - good job!

Absolutely love the premise and you are a supremely talented writer. Please keep it up. The world needs more lesbian mind control stories!!!

I like this one. Can't wait for part 2

Hi Everyone,

Thanks for the comments and kind words. In case anyone's curious, I kept Olivia as "Master" for consistency's sake--and for reasons that will hopefully become clear in Part 2, which should be up shortly. Hope you enjoy the follow up, and thanks again for reading.