All Comments on 'Neighbor Ch. 04'

Soo fucking hott!!!

I love this story so much, please keep it going :)

I dont even want to add anything to it, your doing such a awesome job writing it!!!

Cant wait for ch.5 (please dont keep us waiting long)

Always a good day when one of your stories pops on my list!

My favorite series is back! I love everything about this but I especially love how Maddie and Bobbi love each other. It's so sweet!

How dare someone give this story less than a stellar 5 stars!

Another solid installment!

You're definitely my fav author in this site!

Exquisite writing, loved the detailed account of an all-male threesome. From my own experience of sex with two men you’ve portrayed the sheer dirtiness of it perfectly. I also enjoy how slutty you characterised Bobbi, which I could relate to. Looking forward to much more with these characters.

Wow!!!! I leaked cum all over reading this

This series is mind-blowing. It is by far the hottest series on here. Bobby and Maddie have a relationship one can only dream of. Their submissive and slutty personas are legendary. I was reading Chapter 4 in bed and I was squirming around like when my boyfriend finger fucks me and hits my prostrate, so delicious. I may not get out of bed until Chapter 5 is released

I love everything you post. I check back constantly to see if you have submitted anything new, and I can't help but imagine myself as the bottom in every story because of you...

Well done!!

So looking forward to more...

My personal top fantasy, so thank you 🙏

I'm so glad you're still adding to this series! I love it so much.

So, first let me say that I love your stories, and I look forward to reading (hopefully) many more.

I just wanna mention that it’s actually the Queen Mary permanently docked in Long Beach, CA. Being a SoCal native, I can’t let that slide.

Need more of theses ASAPPPP

Great series and would love to read more about Maddie’s further submissions in chapter 5

Too much kissing for me but still really hot

This whole series is just SOOO fucking hot!

Bring on Chapter 5 - SOON!!!

The story is really good and is a great turn on but I don't like the fact that Maddie stopped taking her birth control pills and the fact that she could get preg by any of the three boys. Some people might disagree but I think that is a little too far.

Great story, but would love to read that this series reverts back to Maddie’s submission...

Fuck im loving this series, would love to see bobby go full faggot, only taking cock, never fucking maddy, only being fucked by her.

Turn Bobby out. Dress him and take him out. The humiliation would be terrific. Share him , film him, just hurry. Looking forward to next chapter. You're really good.

I need more of them. I love this and want to be a slut for them too!!

wonderful storytelling friend, looking forward to more!

What a hot story! Please give us more!

More please. Great story. I love how Bobby is discovering his love for cock and how Maddie finds it so hot.

I've read hundreds of stories and this is by far one of the best I have read. When you add more please let me know at ralleng@yahoo.com

Thanks

Fantastic story, can’t wait to read what comes next

Recently re-read your story friend, came across this in Chapter 3.

"You need to make up for lost time baby," she continued her narrative. "You need to go out and meet up with guys and probably go to a house party or a bathhouse. Maybe Tom could even take you somewhere as his pet for the night. I've actually heard about parties like that downtown. There is this one penthouse party everyone talks about on the various hookup sites. I could dress you up and everything."

Hoping you find inspiration to continue a few more chapters!

Can we get more of Maddie participating in ch5?

Waiting for more chapters of Tom’s alphahood

5 stars for chapter 4! It's a new day, so let's hope the party goes on for awhile!

A nice short interlude, bouyed by that hot DP scene.

came back to Literotica, and was greeted with more chapters to this story! Started with the last one I'd read to refresh, looking forward to the next chapter. bravo!

That really got me going and it reawakened a fantasy in me with a renewed craving!

I'm pretty careful about safe sex. I only take my steady buddy's cum up my ass bareback, but I did bottom bareback one time in a foursome.

I don't know why it never entered my mind at the time, and I don't know if I would have been able to take it, but later on I wished that I had tried to get two of them up my ass at the same time. It makes my cock so hard just thinking of it!

It would be such a turn on, especially if there was a way to get them to both cum at the same time. I can just imagine two guys flooding my sissy cunt with their sperm at the same time and feel their slippery cum covered cocks rubbing together inside my ass!

Your wife's Pink Panties and TWO COCKS and she knows about it too! Pure Heaven!!

Mmmmm. You know, I just might be the slut you're all looking for.

Thank you! Your words are truly electric and the stories they describe make my precum flow, nipples erect and tingly and my mind wishing that it was me starring in your movie. I am truly enjoying your "slutification" and find myself longing for my own Daddy Tom....Know of any in NYC area? Is Eric from NY?

Two cocks in an ass., That would be the ultimate fantasy for me to enjoy. 5 stars!

so exciting that she wants him to become even more submissive and horny for cocks and cum.

I loved it could imagine being Bobby and getting all that sex Being filled with Cum and cock