All Comments on 'Neighbor I'll Remember'

You cut this one off too early. You should have continued it until at least she may have gotten pregnant by you, even if she did not realize it until after she left with her kids.

This is the second item of yours that I've had the pleasure of reading. My sincerest suggestion to you; you should contemplate novels. Your description/tone and pitch of your art is sensually and yet innocently enticing that you are actually "depriving" your audience by lack of length. Less is best at the times when more would be tiresome - you however, have captured sensation and would be a great writer if you would do chapters and novels. Please continue to write....you're good at it.

My neighbor would love the way I'd spew large doses of hot semen all over her tits!