All Comments on 'Neighborhood Star'

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Nice buildup. Looking forward to part number 2. Thanks for sharing.

great beginning, am really looking forward to the next installment(s).

A good beginning. I look forward to more

Good story; you need to watch the Englisg, little things like using posessive (family's) instead of plural (families). An editor might help. Keep going!

I can't wait for the next part.

Wonderful! Such a simple premise and you turn it into such a hot story. Capital!