All Comments on 'Neighborhood Wives: The Reconnection'

I think I read this already.

But sadly it’s just not remotely erotic in any way ... The writing doesn’t flow like the original... I suspect English isn’t your first language. You badly needed a good editor for this project.... it’s a shame but it just doesn’t work.

Suddenly, because he feels bad he (rightfully) sent her for std testing and she pushed blame on him for not telling her 100%-off his thoughts, the ridiculous mea culpa from the people she cheated on him with and disrespected him with lead to a reconciliation that basically consisted of rehashing their dumb fantasies? W H A T ?

I am not sure if you are planning another installment. Jacqui needs to be dealt with. She is a huge part of the story and I could not let my wife still be friends with her, even if she changes. Also, I would like to see Jay have some extracurricular sex with Maddie watching, maybe with Jamie? While Jay does not need to fuck 14 women, there needs to be some balance.

And almost all of it repetition.

First you took nine pages to restate everything the original author wrote, twice.

Now you took two more pages to revisit what you rewrote last chapter.

Then you added three more about a new scene that you repeated two more times.

Basically a couple re-reviewed their history, reset their boundaries, invited some friends over, shared a new experience but found out it went to far for them, and decided they need a counselor. My version of your chapter rewritten in one sentence.

My version is weak and boring but no different than your over done and re-re-redone version.

Stop recapping everything and just write original content. Improve, or destroy the old story if you want but quit believing that if you repeat the same words (both yours and another authors) over and over and over you are generating new and exciting content.

Long and boring as hell.

Jacqui definitely needs to be dealt with. She needs to have a 14 or more ass fuck train pulled on her and some caning to leave her some pain that she caused to Maddie and Jay's marriage.

of a whore and her minions. I understand the low score.

Put this one out of it's misery!!

This was way too long. Too many repetitive things. Normally I don't play "Grammar Police" but the poor writing hurt the stories chances of being entertaining. Maybe don't post 2 stories on the same day thereby giving you a chance to do a better job of proof reading? This was badly done.

1 star

Maddie is going to end up being a promiscuous slut, and Jay is going to end up being a cum slurping cuck, in women's underwear. With a dildo up his ass.

How do you dress that up into some sort of serious sexual fantasy and fulfillment? Its just animal lust and unrestrained sexual appetite. Ask any dog.

The marriage is toast. That is a light at the end of the tunnel, buts its not daylight.

Way too wordy and contrived. But thanks for the effort.

A really bad story, No sense of reality at all.

I do not know who you mix with author, but normal people are not built to be like this. I have been around for 7 decades, know so many people my head spins. I have seen so many divorces it isn’t funny. Divorces caused by many things but quite a few thru cheating by either party.

But not once have I ever met a cuckold of either sex who puts up with the bullshit you guys love to bang on about. It is bitter and it is sometimes nasty, but divorce has always been the answer, no mucking around. That said, I have seen reconciliation after a divorce and some remarriages, not many tho.

You are one of many who write this stuff, why?

God knows from many Literotica fans that is for sure.

That said, you seem a decent writer, a little turgid, but ok. Mix your stories a bit and please understand that looking for these super forgiving wimps you guys love in the real world is very hard. That is because they largely do not exist.

Before you get too upset with my views, remember, you agree to scoring your stories and you invite comment.

Good luck with your future works

Scores 1/5

So let me see if I have this right, he hated the sex party and her disrespect, so to fix that they mess around with her sister and Bill, then decide the solution is for him to wear women’s lingerie while she fucks him in the ass. Come on what a load of bollocks.

and so goes the death spiral.

With all the moaning comments, it makes me wonder what people want.

They complain about the length and yet they have obviously read it all.

Also with the number of comments it must have excited lots of reaction.

I thought it was a very exciting tale and the conversations were just lovely.

Well done and well worth 5 stars for this one and the other two.

I am happy that Maddie at last discovered that behavior which had been bothering me and had me squirming in my chair. Good story. I like happier endings. LOL

Neighborhood whores, and an epic waste of time on this POS story.

No matter how you dress it up with talk of love, communication, respect, and honesty; it’s still disgusting and perverted. It’s just a story about weak and selfish people who would rather pull everyone around them into the mud than standing up and cleaning ones self. The writer and anyone who thinks these are examples of heathy and well adjusted adults should seek help. Something in your life or past has damaged your perception and needs to be addressed. Hopefully you guys are not responsible for any children and your morals and principles as well as you DNA doesn’t get passed on into the next generation. It’s almost scary that such a person could pretty up a story like this and make such people look almost normal. Just goes to show how wasted talent gets wasted on such things.

If she'd done what she did to me, she'd probably be pushing up daisies. Absolutely no excuse for being a slut like that. If she did it once, she'll do it again.

You really have to suffer from a dysfunctional personality if you can accept this shit that you wrote! A woman who turns out to be a whore and only involves others in her sexual perversities, apart from her husband, you can never trust him again. Or can you show me a similar scam that didn't break up? Only the fact that you drew the male protagonist as a sissy weakling inspired you to write your fantasy like that. Only in nature are men very, very seldom like that or almost never. Any man would take her written confession and let a divorce judge decide if she could even be a reliable mother. In addition, a survey by the Bertalsman Foundation says that 98% of all couples who have tried swinging, swapping, sharing, cuckolding are destroyed within two years. Main reasons jealousy and / or a partner falls in love again!

This was so awful

Unfortunately it wasn't remotely close to the literary quality of the original and the narrative was too repetitive throughout both chapters to offer a reader much progression. The outcome was sadly not remotely anything like the original authors characters and style on which it was based.

Chapter begins after wife and his close friends betrayed him in worst way. Then I wade through pages of husband, wife, deceitful friends and newly introduced friends talk through how they will repair trust and rebuild marriage.

I just could not believe the plot progression. Frankly I think Nylondreams just wrote all the kinky fetish voyeur cuck plot actions on paper slips put them in a hat and randomly drew them and wrote them into the story. Husband has his heart ripped out by wife and friends and is humiliated so solutions are put him in panties have a dominant dyke peg him have wife peg him have him participate in swapping and open marriage. Ummm wasn’t that what ripped his heart open? The plot just wandered from loving reconnecting discussion after discussion to how can they add kinky sex to their marriage.

Don’t write when you’re horney and high. Outline before you write and have an editor.

If nylondreams wants husband in panties, pegged and sucking the other husbands then go for it. I think nylon was attempting to write the struggles of the husband dealing with his conflicting desires of a hot wife his voyeur cuck desires and insecurities of his marriage as everyone manipulated and betrayed him. The story just wandered with no clear path.

With all the above I think another chapter would be interesting and could wrap all the loose ends into a nice package. Have husband and wife embrace some kink and suffer for it.

...does anyone actually give a shit? Shitty people abound in this 3-part pile of steaming dung.Hopefully there will be no continuation of this crap-fest unless the writer plans to have all of the characters perish when the house they’re having the orgy in explodes when a gas-line erupts and sends tits, cocks and cunts raining down throughout the neighborhood.

I think this typist's stories are more about their fantasy that actual people in the real world wouldn't find disgusting pieces of shit so repelling.

She got to have her fun but shut the store down without balancing the scales. It's her turn to watch while he has his.

Ugh... Just, No.

I say this with as much love and honesty as I can muster, you are truly a terrible writer. One of the worst I've ever had the displeasure of reading. Your characters read they way I imagine you are in your daily life, stupid to the point of being certified and completely unable to think about anyone aside from their own cunt. I advise you slit your own wrists before you even think about writing again. Along the arm not across it, just in case you're dumb enough to do the latter.

I think she should have allowed him to have his way with some ladies as she watches a video or something. She may have control but she hasn't allowed him any freedom or set itnup to balance the scales.

Finally got her head where it belongs!

This is the second story I've read from this author. No more. Both were garbage. I was hoping for better. I hate wimpy MC's stories.

Very well written. Having said that, I think Jay is fooling himself. He's papering over damage that cannot be fixed easily. If he tries to let lust fill that place where love used to be, he will grow to hate Maddie. These, as well as the original story, do not really discuss how the new dynamics affect their kids. This never needed to be a BTB story, but this "resolution" just kicks the emotional can down the road. Jay will be haunted by it, and it will damage their relationship if not dealt with now.

I think that if any man had heard what she had done in that sex club no matter how much he loved her there is no way he could stay married just the thought if she was late home from work or even the park he would be thinking she was with another man or woman as for his so called friends they all new and made a concious choice to humiliate him they would be toast as for the ring leader I would if it was me drag her by the hair to the homeless men in the Area and offer her to them and watch them take turn on her as well as to make sure some of them have some very nasty diseases then leave her there to accept her fate knowing I was the one who put her their to be used as my wife and there would be 14 men and 8 women just nit the clean ones that were at the club as for the 14 and 8 they would meet timely accidents sorry for going so dark but to loose everything because someone was jealous retribution has to delt out. I love all of the stories of your that I have read I both felt for the victim and their husband very relateablei can sympathise with them but not on this one could of and should have been so much more thank you for listening to my rant

I didn't see the reason for this addition. Parts could've been added to the original then edited it to avoid being so damned long... both parts. 15 pages? Again, I can't see why he'd want to stay with her after her spending whatever weeks in the sex club. And the continuation almost immediately of the flashing now with the addition of the strip poker games leads me to believe that Maddie, one time in the future, may return, at least a bit, to the sex parties without Jay... or with another man or 3 behind his back. 2 stars. 15 pgs? Shouldn't have been more than 5 or 6. --Bob

Good ending, but I hope not the closing of the family/neighbors tale. You have left many possibilities either open and/or unfinished. Please consider further tales of these characters. Perhaps this could be not the end of the neighborhood, but the beginning???

Too long, just a shy different from the main story. This could've been drastically edited, along with tightening in part 1, & just had one story instead of a 2nd one as part 2. Lastly, after seeing her at the dance club, then at the sex club & wanting more the following week... just why is he wanting to stay married to her after her betrayal, etc.? Just that one night is enough to set fire to any marriage.

As such, 2 stars. -- Bob

Reading this was so boring I had more fun watching paint dry

His partner did the dirty 22+ times, not once. You are just a shitty author hiding a wanna be cuckold half fag inside of you.

Just once? How many hours did she spend fucking who knows how many men in that sex club?

Just once, lol, LMAO even.

She didn't learn a thing from the incident except that Mr. Cuck is weak, spineless and if she holds out long enough his temper will flame out and then she can tease (NOT EVEN FUCK OR BLOW), crocodile tear and excuse herself by slut committee back into his good graces.

Pathetic really. Beta male gonna beta I guess.

UTTER TRASH AND WASTE OF TIME READ OF A WEAK WIMPY CUCK AND HIS WHORING WIFE!!

Author you really are fucking full of shit you drone on about love but guess what love is a decision not a fucking affliction like this poor fucking idiot

Yeah right. Soulmates pull trains with 22 people without their husband, even worse knowing their husband is pissed off and hurting and left the building. Being high is not an excuse. This is only slightly odious than the prior chapter. Was hoping the MC asked tough questions and found a way out. Instead it is all this Bill and Amy crao and all a discussion on hypothetical, where the wife wants to peg her husband wearing lingerie and she wants to invite Maggie to fuck her orally and with a dildo in front of her husband. Doesn't sound like she learned anything. Besides why would Jay ever believe his wife woukd stay within the bounds of any new rules? She broke the old ones. She let Jacqui manipulate and push her. This process was over months. She had no qualms at the time betraying her husband and their old rules to let Kirk and Jacqui fuck her. What about the crap in the car beforehand? I don't usually like using rhe word, but Jay is a cuckold. He even said he was aroused at hearing about the train, though also jealous. Huh? The man has no spine. Even if reconciliation were possible for her actions in this space-time continuum, which it isn't, then why put more stress on their marriage its hypothetical that could open the wounds again. Even if one buys her crao about what she really wanted that night in the club getting fucked by Kirk, and somehow the reader believe the trope about her look of disdain was self loathing (in which case why didn't she fucking STOP, but instead continued and went on the long 3.5 hour train with 22 people), if her husband and girls are so important to her, why risk it with stepping out again with other partners. She still hasn't given up on her hard swap next to each other holding hands PHantasy. And again why would Jay even if he thinks she woukd never leave him for another man, why would he ever think he could be enough even with their many role-playing activities. How can he ever trust her again? Heck why woukd he ever think he could give her enough pleasure anymore. She was supposedly coming continously with Maggie and then the train. That means despite protestations to the opposite about the fantasy of the train being better than the reality, she thought it was incredibly hot. Great for her. You had a lot of orgasms as a slut. You get a cookie! Why should you keep your husband? Not to mention all the lying to even get to that point. Even in the sex club, she acts like a junkie who has no control of her actions. Bullshit. Though a lot of that was inherited from the crappy foundation story. Uggh. Terrible story.

I need to reconcile the fact that there are people out there that love this sort of lifestyle. I don't often see them married for long, but that would be a waste of time anyway with the amount of strange they pull on a regular basis. I've had couples come onto my wife and I numerous times, and no matter how flattering we both knew that what we had was special and inviting snakes into the garden would end up destroying our special relationship. I guess some people don't have that to start with, start from a low denominator and work their way through strange cocks and cunts fulfilling a base need. Our swinging friends never seem to be happy, they are always niggling and looking for the next conquest rather than spending quality time building their marriage up. Therein lies the crux of the argument, that you can't be in a loving, committed relationship and be a slut on the side. Every sexual interaction with someone that isn't your spouse will require a modicum of emotion. You don't let a man enter your most private areas without opening up emotionally to them first thereby taking away from your spouse. And for those that think it's "just sex" really don't have much self respect for themselves to begin with. Thats why they are looking for strange, to try and find the validation for their low self esteem.