All Comments on 'Neighborly Love'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Liked the tale...

and you’ve left room for further adventures, or leave it as a stand-alone story. Ah to be so lucky as to have such concerned neighbours!

I would have liked a bit more description of her hopefully smaller boobs as he was laying back, but it in no way detracted from the story flow.

The only major flaw to my eye, is the fact that his text was from one floor up, instead of down the hall. Nice job of writing!

Paul4playPaul4playover 3 years ago

Wonderful erotic tale!

Developed well with solid characters and a reasonable story line.

Looking forward to their second meeting!

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