All Comments on 'Neighbors Ch. 01'

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CornixCornixabout 3 years ago

Thank you for submitting your story. Interested to see where it might go. The story tags give an indication of the direction of the story, all looks enticing. I would like to know more about both characters and perhaps what was the appointment? Yes yoga and gym are possibilities but many others too.

There are a few spelling mistakes which couldn't get picked up by spell checker so I would recommend reading future chapters before posting.

Thank you again

adumbtwinkgirladumbtwinkgirlabout 3 years ago

Love this, can't wait for more.

glauconglauconabout 3 years ago

Enjoying it so far, looking forward to how it develops!

BetaCuckLoserDeniedPussyBetaCuckLoserDeniedPussyalmost 3 years ago

This is hilarious, great story! I loved the rain pouring down at the end, perfect foreshadowing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This dude is the definition of simp omg this is hilarious. Lmao

jamieanne63jamieanne63about 2 years ago

Oh! What a delightful start to a fun story! I think I'll enjoy this one!

sanjuinmoodsanjuinmoodover 1 year ago

Nice build up. Look forward to what happens next…

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love this story. Makes me realize what a simp I could be if I ran into a girl like this.

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Hello everyone, I’m overwhelmed by the support for my story, “Neighbors”. I wanted to let everyone know that I am still writing, but life has gotten rather busy and I’m not able to keep up the pace I had for the first thirteen chapters. Please bear with me and I’ll get them up...

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