All Comments on 'Neighbors Ch. 01'

Omg I’m early 😩 Please post more

Learn to write in the 3rd person. Constant POV changes ruins the flow of a story.

Wow. Two flawed people. How will they overcome their own issues to explore the interest there appears to be in the other person?

Completely disagree with the 3rd person commenter - you handle the perspective changes nicely. Keep it up!

I like where this is heading. Good writing!

Please please continue this story it's so good

I also think you do the POV changes very well and I cannot express how much I need more of this story! 💙

I love this story and can't wait to read more. I have fantasies around coercion and guys who are stalkers slowly taking what they want. Great writing. - Kymbr

Will there be another release for this ?

As someone with aspergers this is going to be interesting to read