by betaboy84
Thank you for another chapter, your work on this story is amazing!! A couple lines that really struck me:
“Glancing over at Amber in the seat next to me, I thought that it was all worth it.”
He is a true submissive, he is enjoying all that Amber does to him.
And:
“If you're brave tonight I might let you take Sarah and I to lunch tomorrow. We normally meet every Wednesday and I'll consider letting you come along. Ok?"
With that, she gave my arm a quick squeeze and got out of my car.”
She “might” let him take Sarah and her to lunch. She’ll “consider” letting him come along. Even when Christ is sacrificing for her, she’s still not sure she’ll reward him. That is a wonderfully dominant character, great writing!!
You keep doing Amazing WORK!!!
This story is one of the best ever, and I am eager to see where you take this next.