by betaboy84
"I wondered idly how they had managed to cross paths. Something tugged at my memory but I couldn't quite grasp it."
Oh, shit....
Great chapter! I would love to see “this mysterious Dr. Latham,” brought into the story, I’m sure there could be some really hot material there.
Please. The draught has lasted too long. We need your beautiful mind to produce once again.
Just got done reading all 26 and loved it! Hopefully you can continue writing these at some point so we know what happened next :)
Well, it's been more than 3 months since the last chapter, therefore I've no choice but to arbitrarily conclude that you've dropped this story, about which I'm so sad. I was so excited for [my vision of how the story would play out]. Hope you continue someday. . . BUT I DOUBT IT.
It's such a shame that you abandoned this masterpiece.
I think this could've been a masterpiece if you continued to say, chapter 40. stripping Chris from anything he has step by step in the expanse of a year, and at the end reaching a state of absolute poverty, servitude, and slavery for these women.
I think this could've benefited from a few flashforwards.
Still, hope you're doing well and maybe come back to this one day. I would personally pay money for a completion of this.
Now I feel compelled to clarify that I was just parodying a comment which was made on chapter 24 (and has now been essentially repeated here, seemingly unironically). There's no reason to assume that the author is done with this story. Check the dates on his story page. There have been plenty of long gaps. And check his comment on his biography page. He's working on it when he can.
Assuming you mean more stories that mainly feature domestic femdom/findom/chastity/humiliation/simping/etc, I've not read any others of *this* quality. But a couple that have stood out to me are:
- "Queen Kiera" by Peter Omez (I especially like much of the first 2 chapters)
- "Serving Emma" by IllDoAnythingYouAsk (moves very quickly and is relatively short)
Good news ppl! I talked to the author and he told me he will write more chapters and they will be up may/june.
Hmmm... I dunno, dude. I heard from an anonymous source that the author abandoned this masterpiece. Which is such a shame, because this masterpiece could've been a masterpiece had he continued to say, 300k words. Maybe 320 with a few much-needed chronoflashes.
I check every morning, first thing, to see if this story has been continued. God I hope so. It is sooooo good!!
My wife has forbidden me to jerk off/cum or have sex with her before the new chapter is out. I beg you man please upload more. Im chasitizied...
Here's what you do: Feed the first 26 chapters to ChatGPT and tell it to write chapter 27. Then mirror betaboy's profile and add the new chapter. You'll be splooging in no timiei.
Just talked to the author you guys. He said he won't be able to finish, but he gave me the ending. Here it is:
"Hours passed, and she never came back. I yelled for help, but no one came. I couldn't figure out how to get out of the stall, so I eventually died.
The end."
I still check this story everyday for updates lol, one of the best findom stories hope it gets continued
Please betaboy84 don't let this story die I will pay if you wanna release the rest of the chapters elsewhere
"One daaaaay, when you're rea-dy... one daaaay, one day when you're up tooo iiiiit...
An ae-ro-plaaaaane, will curve gracefullyyyy, around the volcanooooooo…
with theeee, e-rup-tion, that never let’s youuu down...”