All Comments on 'Neighbors Pt. 01'

I was ok with the story even though you change from him having a dad, then a step dad and then back to a dad again.

But then you go into superheros, just like your last story.

I think this would have been better in the Sci-Fi & Fantasy category or at least let us know in your introduction.

Can’t wait to read more

Great thanks, i'm looking forward to more!

hope you are not done with this story so much more to hear

I love the way they bring Sklyar out of his shell to realize the girl inside hope it continues

i so wish i was skylar , so jealous, please continue this story

Cant wait to read more of this story. Keep up the good work.

I like the story. I am trying to figure out how you are going to go on.i am anxiously awaiting.

Wish I was Skylark too

More please!!!

Same as the header

Best story i have read ever i can't wait for part 2!!!

Can’t wait for Chapter 2.

I want to read more of this hoping there are more chapters to come.

But dang if I wouldn't love being in Skylar's place for a bit.

This needs a lot more work to make it a story.

absolutely wow... chapter 2 please

This is really soooo yummy and fun we girl's need more "PLEASE" follow up on this gorgeous baby doll being turned into a hot teenage girl!!!! My "Boy P---Y" is so wet.

I hope you have it in your mind that this story needs to continue. So many ways that the story can go, Maddie and Gelicia can help there new sub by letting him/her move in and then turning him into their permanent bottom sub. Skylar moves in with them, and somewhere down the line the bully at his school gets his just punishment and humiliation.

Now, as for Skylar, I would love to be him/her in this past scene. A dream of mine would be to be a bottom sub to a Trans top. The story sound so sexy and hot when Skylar is being turned into their playtime sub I think about sucking on a big thick cock, only to have it explode in my mouth. Also the thought of having another thick hot cock fucking my boi pussy and dumping copious amounts of cum in me would be heaven!

Chapter 2, please!

Amazing story, wonderful build up. I wish i could write relationships like you.

Part two

That was very nice love story,and i would love to come across a set of new neighbors like these two, anyone want to make this sissy, tramp, bitch, slave, sluts dreams true

Is there going to be a part 2?

do not leave this with just one part

This story needs to continue on! PLEASE!!!

Please next chapter. I’m feeling it’s me. Can’t wait to see we’re you go in the transformation.