All Comments on 'Neighbourhood Terror to Sissy Pt. 34'

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Thank-you for this latest chapter. There are still so many directions that this story could take ...

A day late, and just two measly pages that basically repeat the previous chapter without substantially advancing the plot, or character development of the protagonist. In other words a complete waste of time meant only to drag this shameless, b/s profiteering out...

Another commenter mentioned this already, but I’d like to echo their criticisms. This chapter feels as if it’s a continuation of the last chapter, not a new chapter itself. No new real plot developments or character moments, and nothing to keep us reading other than “sexy hot words make my horny levels go brrrrr”.

I disagree with some of the other comments. While this chapter is shorter and more of a continuation, it’s does offer some development for Marcy’s character. For example, until this point, marcy has always been the passive receiver, resigned to her fate, but by freeing her bindings and forcing her to fuck her himself, John has forced her to face the fact she loves cock, changing their dynamic more. Also, she finally accepts the inevitable conclusion that she will be outed to everyone and accepts at least being trans for the first time; until this point, she had some hope of returning to a male identity. These thoughts may have been hinted at in earlier chapters, but she readily acknowledges them now. I, for one, loved the sexy change in Marcy’s mindset, even if her partner is John for now. It’s a great chapter and I look forward to more.

I disagree with some of the other comments. While this chapter is shorter and more of a continuation, it’s does offer some development for Marcy’s character. For example, until this point, marcy has always been the passive receiver, resigned to her fate, but by freeing her bindings and forcing her to fuck her himself, John has forced her to face the fact she loves cock, changing their dynamic more. Also, she finally accepts the inevitable conclusion that she will be outed to everyone and accepts at least being trans for the first time; until this point, she had some hope of returning to a male identity. These thoughts may have been hinted at in earlier chapters, but she readily acknowledges them now. I, for one, loved the sexy change in Marcy’s mindset, even if her partner is John for now. It’s a great chapter and I look forward to more.

Love the story. I am a Sissy so definitely wish it was me . I think an interesting twist would be for Macy to tell her parents she is a Sissy only to here them say they already knew because of security cameras they installed in the house so for now on she could be herself at home

Move along nothing new to see here.

Nice warm-up can't wait for more.

I'm thinking Marcy's parents already know, maybe even in on it. Hope Marcy gets revenge on Linda and the dirty bastard

Fibaro, a very nice story, I do hope you complete it. Marcy is accepting herself as a sissy, thats great, but she has to get some revenge on John, perhaps with the help of his girl friend, the Dom at the store and her black sub, perhaps they arrange a gay gang rape for John and stream it live. When he comes out as trans to his parents get him involved with his parents. Could be Marcy and the son of the clothing store owner become real lovers and get Linda out of the business (by blackmail) and run it themselves. Please continue this, I appreciate you sharing your talent with us, it is appreciated.

Thank you, amy a writer elsewhere

i wish i was marcy id love to have all that cum every day