All Comments on 'Nellie and The Unicorn Onesie'

Funny, endearing and hot. This story has it all. I enjoyed my second read of this. Cheryl, you are a very talented writer.

I'm thinking about registering for the spring semester.

Great story, MsTerra.

A hot and horny fleecy floozie who is a champion beer pong player, what more could we want?

Cute and entertaining. I really enjoyed reading that. Thanks.

defence and favourite. When I read this, I visualize a woman up to her chest in snow in the wilds of Canada trying to keep warm on a winter's night. Well done! Keep posting with the Canadian flavour. I love the tags "straight sex" and "woman on top". Just imagine a woman on top having straight sex!

It's not easy combining humor and eroticism, but you've done it perfectly in this story. The beer pong game (and subsequent "naked" beer pong game) was terrific, and of course the backyard sex scene was very steamy. I really loved the ending, too.

As norafares said, I very much enjoyed reading it again. And I look forward to reading more of Nellie's adventures.

Damn hot stuff!

My friend, you know how to write a sex scene. This 5* beauty will be part of foreplay for a while. Thanks for sharing your incredible (and steamy) writing talents

I wasn't familiar with your writing until now, but I will be watching for more from now on. Great writing and hot as hell. 5*s from me all day long.

I did my BSc by correspondence. Look at all the good stuff I missed!

This made me smile all the way through.

Thank you, ma'am. 5*

I only played beer pong once, and I did get laid. I was too drunk to walk so I don't know how I managed it. The resilience of youth, I suppose. Thanks for the story, CherylTerra.

Hard to relate to this from personal experience. Maybe that's why I liked it so well.

Well written as well as sexy. I'm looking forward to reading more of your works.

Great writing, good story. I loved it.

THANKS

I feel like I'd enjoy meeting both the leads in reality.

Another short but intense story. Well done.

Genius

My second Nellie story and I was not disappointed (Not that I expected to be after the first!!). Loved every word and will be reading the rest in the order they were written.

Your writing is unique. If this makes any sense to you, it is light yet intense. There is zero emotional baggage! No problems with previous significant others,etc.. For maybe a paragraph I thought Connor might become a problem, but no, he’s simply a jerk, but he fortunately wasn’t an overbearing one.

Being fortunate enough to be with a woman when she has a “triple” is amazing. I assure you I do not need to take my shoes off to count the times I was that lucky, or perhaps good AND lucky is more like it. And the raincoat likely helped Jake hold out long enough to be-there for her. Try as they may with condoms, they will never be as sensitive or erotic as skin on skin.

Anyway, just an outstanding story! Some fantasy, but still real enough that the reader doesn’t end up saying “oh, please!” , instead of just reading and enjoying!

Thank you for such a well written contribution.

Uncle Al (my account not yet approved or whatever, so i must post this as anonymous)

Starting the Nellie series in your recommended order and as usual, you fail to disappoint. 10/10

Great story ! Loved the humour, Nellie sounds like such a fun character I'll have to get to know her a bit better.

What a Hot hookup! And such fun characters, I can see this going on for a while.

I mean, when you have a hookup like that, you have to go back for more! ;->

Great story. Brings back great memories.

I was a bit like Jake. I was the nerd who had been taught by a cute accounting majornerd how to lick labia lips and caress clits, both at parties and elsewhere. A very useful skill.

Looking forward to more stories

Reader in YYZ

This story was cute, and I enjoyed the humor. My one suggestion would be to cut the last paragraph. Stop with the final line of dialogue. That's where the narrative energy ends, and it hints at more to come for these characters. The last paragraph releases the tension and feels like a denouement. Stopping on the dialog maintains the tension and leaves the reader anticipating the next installment.

Sweet and funny!

And now I know what beer pong is...

Really delightful story.

Funny and fun and I hope the rest are this good. The dialogue is great

Loved it. Humorous and sexy all in one. Great start for this series.ooking forward to the rest. BardnotBard.

Good premise.

Cock into pussy was too fast. Too straightforward.

Needed her exploring it -- and his balls -- a while after he'd already given her her first orgasm before she had/let him insert it into her pussy.

Four stars.

Great fun, paced well, edited well so there was no fat on the story and we are rooting (sorry) for Nellie and Jake to win at both pong & hide the salami. Hard to imagine how this could be improved tbh, although if I’m honest I find it difficult to like a character called Jake, it’s just a bit too Chad imho.

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers, Ppfzz. 5⭐️