by Felix921
This is so freakin' good. The characterization, the relationship building and budding romance, and of course the sex is hot without feeling artificial either. This is really great. Thank you for gifting it to us! :)
Thanks so much for the comments Anons. It means a lot to hear from readers - and of course it's extra nice when it's positive feedback lol. I enjoy making characters with a little personality and trying to make the scenarios a little entertaining beyond just the porn stuff, so I'm glad that comes across.
Been busy with other stuff, but Part 3 is officially in the works. Maybe I'll even proofread it better than I did Part 2, lol.
Bravo! Great writing with believable, relatable characters. Anna and Jack's chemistry makes their budding romance feel wholesome, even with all the hot sex, bodily fluids and whatnot... I'm rooting for those two and hope that there's many chapters yet to come!
I'm totally loving this developing love story. You have a talent for drawing believable and likeable characters and I'm really looking forward to seeing how their story develops.š
I love the way this is going. I hope Jack and Anna get together. They seem like a great match. Mmmmmm