by Felix921
This is an awesome story. It totally comes across as goofy, loving, silly, sweet, and completely real. It’s the same thing everyone goes through when they are starting to get to know someone and attempting to feel out if an actual relationship is possible which can be so frustrating at times but also utterly endearing. I can’t imagine how hard it must be for Anna to trust anyone when it comes to dating or relationships after what she has probably gone through in the past. It also has to be difficult for Jack having to be careful and not put his foot in his mouth as he tends to deflect with attempted humor which falls flat at times. I am hoping you continue to write about this pair which you have been doing a wonderful job of displaying the ups and downs of a forming relationship. Thank you for putting so much effort into this story as it really does show.
J.D.
I had intended to put a note at the beginning of this part, but since I forgot I'll put it here until part 4 is ready... Thanks to everyone who has read, voted, subbed, and especially those who have taken the time to comment. It has been tremendously gratifying and encouraging.
And while I won't make any promises on exactly how soon, there is definitely more to cum ;)
Liked it, a LOT. It flows, starts in the right place, and finishes with an open ending. Room for more chapters, I'd say, and I wouldn't be the least unhappy about that.
Love these two, their humour and the tenderness. Can’t wait for part 4.