All Comments on 'Nervous Tension Ch. 01'

No plot + no writing ability = no story.

Why do you put this story in loving wifes when there is no mentioning of a husband in the story why didnt you put it into the mature section instead the story is about a woman meets a guy online and she goes to the bar to meet hom she doesnt even recognise him so why not put it into the mature section instead?

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Wow! Loved this hot ride! It left me panting and very turned on! I could literally feel the tension between them.... great writing; very creative and very, very erotic!! Loved what you did with her.....

Looking forward to reading chapter 2!

Great story, well written. Hot, fast and very sensual. The title is well suited to the story too. Nice to see you getting some well deserved positive feedback!

You didn't do.any of that to me asshole. Story just doesn't work.