All Comments on 'Never Have I Ever Pt. 01'

Reminds me of a couple different stories put together and I really like it

A little short, could have done with a bit more build up to create tension, but certainly a solid and enjoyable read.

intriguing. more please!

Great start. Please don’t delay part two. 😏

5*

Tc

I loved it! Great twist with the baby! Can’t wait for more. 5 stars.

Take Dillon back to Oregon

Great story but think you will need more than 2 chapters 5/5

Great story, can’t wait for part 2

Honestly, I expected more love to come out from both Brook and Dillon. Especially since the marriage between Todd and Brook is apparently a marriage of convenience more than a marriage from love. I certainly hope that you build up the story around Dillon crushing on her brother. She's saved herself for him alone from the way that you wrote this installment, and she's obviously willing to share him with Brook without any fights, arguments, or jealousy. So she must be totally in love with him. 🤔 You really set the bar high enough for yourself and I hope that you don't miss the mark. 4/5

Great story

Love how you rolled her flat on her tummy, played with her and gave her the fucking no one else could

Now that is family love a true loving brother and a good brother in Law. Good story and good telling of the story.

Great story I agree more than 2 chapters