All Comments on 'Never Say Never'

Good story, but I’m not a fan of having characters jump from “Hi” to “Marry me” so quickly. Just seems odd.

Great story. Well written but a little concerned about Jeremy as his affection seems to move erratically. 5⛤

Agreed that story moved too fast and too straightforward. Three stars.

Love it. Well written as always.

Wonderful

0-60 in 0.2s is never the right approach for erotica.

Wonderful story!

And then, when he was 60 and she was in her late thirties, he developed some occasional atrial fibrillation, which shocked him since he’d always worked out and eaten well. After a few ablations he started heart rhythm drugs which calmed his rhythm issues but gave him ED. Without the drugs he was in constant palpitations and with them - a limp dick.

She was 40 - he was in his mid 60’s.

Who was plumbing her depths then?

Great story, I always love happy endings. I love the way you write.

Loved it !! Thank you very much.

It's a nice little fantasy, and steamy in all the right places. Thanks for sharing!

Great story. Loved it

Hi, S&F,

Enjoyable story with some good humor in places and plenty of steam in others. I think Jada nailed it that Jeremy was very immature and needed to grow up. His latch-on, disconnect, try-to-latch back on routine made him rather unlikeable so I was glad Jada got away from him and with Denny, though I wondered if she wasn’t just rebounding with him at first, too. Fortunately it worked out well (though quickly) and we got to see one last bit of Jeremy’s immaturity shine through when he showed up at the wedding with yet another new girlfriend. Jada made the right choice. Great job!

Well written, as always, and it certainly fit the nude day theme well. Good luck in the contest.

Thanks for all the kind comments. It was a fun story to write, and I'm glad that so many of you enjoyed it.

Fucking incredible. Or, incredible fucking? Whatever. This was great.

At least the father didn't look a gift horse in the mouth!

5

Each time I see the "Smuttyandfun" byline I know I'm in for a good read! Thank you so much. In addition to being stimulating and generally fun to read, your stories are consistently well-written. It is a pleasure not being distracted by poor punctuation, bad grammar, inconsistencies (hey, wasn't her name Jane a few paragraphs earlier?), etc. Thanks!

Thanks, Tom! Glad you enjoy what I write!

A great read. Thank you

Very nice. My stories tend to be kinkier, but it's nice to read something romantic once in a while.