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Anonymousover 4 years agoA+
I just wanted to let you know how great this was, very clear and believable. You should be very proud.
chennai_rakshasanover 4 years agoShort & Sweet
Extraordinarily short but still exciting. Cheers!! 5 stars!!!
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoTerrible attempt at being "different". Don't change it if it ain't broke. Simpler sentences aren't a sin.
"My pussy gasps and gags, gushing, drooling, flooding the crotch of your jeans."
What does that even mean? Gasps? Gags?? Jesus, I understand that sometimes writers get creative, but this is a mess. Took me right out of the moment. A gagging vagina? This is awful.
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