All Comments on 'New Bride's Strange Desire'

you get wiser, for you and from my point of view on your story all you did was become an idiot.

Indian WACC writer,what could be more demeaning.

I thought it was playfully written and fun. I liked it. Not sure why all the anonymous dislikes.

from expressing the wife's desire for exhibitionism to a "swinging" life style is a worldclass leap to throw aside whatever vows you made to one another at your marriage.

Loved your story! It is sweet and sexy all at the same time. While your grammar and syntax aren't technically perfect, allowing your own speech patterns to influence your writing has a nice effect on the story as a whole. It really helped me to conjure images of the scenes, imagining the two of you interacting. Nicely done!

Therefore, I only rated it 4 stars.

I overrated this posting with a 2 Star. It should be written in this person's native language or after he becomes 14 yrs. old.

I have a desire. I desire that I never make the mistake of reading your crap again.

What happened to the delivery guy? Was he gay? Couldn't he get a hard on? Did she at least give him a tip? So is this pizza huts new slogan "have it your way, but nude or not we still deliver with a smile!