All Comments on 'New Coworker'

First class story on your first submission. Can't wait for the next one! 5 stars

It's well written, but the man's awkwardness and autism seemed to disappear in a way that wasn't realistic.

Ugh - Started with a lot of promise by then fell apart in the back half. She went from romantically interested to wonton slut and he went from autistic to sexual predator. Not! Your writing style was solid, but the plot lines made no finish, especially to post in "Romance". Much better fir for EC genre. 3.5*

Very hot, very sexy, which is what I was looking for!

Good first story!

5

Good story two shy and interesting people finally make a connection keep them coming.

Really good!

This is an excellent romance story, other than the fact that it is much too short. There is a good introduction to the characters, and the plot builds smoothly and steadily throughout. The love scene is very tastefully done, and the plot merges into it perfectly; however, the scene is too short, and certainly could have been expanded and embellished. Five stars.

A continuation with a part two would be nice. There is two different men and two different women in the story. You need to bring them together, still a great story. You have creates a story that readers want more of.