All Comments on 'New Discoveries Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Not to my taste at all!

Daniel6700044Daniel67000449 months ago

Nice debut! Like the slow build up and internal tension as a straight young guy realises he might not be quite as straight - or dominant - as he thought. Lots of potential for development in terms of sub/dom, mature/young and TS themes. Like the fact that you focus on character motivation and plausibility. Following - look forward to more!!!

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