All Comments on 'New Enceladus Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think you screwed up when you forgot to mention what kind of pie. HAH!

Seriously though, I love the POV you use for the characters rationalization of why they act and feel the way they do. I like how it gives a deeper look into their minds instead of the usual guesswork of assuming someone is just a whack job.

LimnophileLimnophilealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Enka has a weight problem and likes all kinds of pie. It's easy to just say a person is 'crazy' if they do something strange or wrong. Explaining why instead of a simple 'crazy' is the difficult but fun part. Thanks for reading, and for your comments.

LimnophileLimnophilealmost 3 years agoAuthor

Like all other people, Enka has flaws, but she's smart enough to understand and admit them, at least to herself. When she complains about her husband, she says, "he's nearly as stubborn and arrogant as I am."

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