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Click here"I'll try, Harry," I said. "'Stephen's' profession is kind of closely connected with parts of the plot. What plot there is. I'll see what I can do.... What's the third request?"
Harry had this odd look in his eyes. "Next time you set the Wayback Machine for the late 1960s... invite me to come along, will you?"
- COMMENTS
Rapier875over 1 year agoA great start, excellent first few chapters, but then for me it all fell apart.
And it ended with a very disappointing finale.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoI came of age in the sixties and.had no trouble seeing this as true. In fact as survivor of several attempts at creating a lasting extended marriage I could identify with several scenes.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoI have to admit, after chapter 2 I just skipped to chapter 9 to see if it was worth reading. It wasn't. I got the entire plot, and didn't have to wade through all the boring badinage and utopian open marriage drivel. But thanks for the effort.
AndyAndrewsabout 2 years agoHi Peter, an innovative and creative way to end your first excellent series of lovely stories. Using this chat to put forward your approach to writing was also nice. Great work and I hope we see more from you soon, Andy
legsfeettoesabout 2 years agoFabulous! Outstanding! Five stars for this one and one hundred for the whole work. Glad you thought I helped some, but I think it was not that much. Nonetheless, "You're welcome." And good luck to Stephen in getting into Donna's and many others' pants while enjoying the free pass from Ann. Are any of these ladies headed to New Hampshire soon? I can only dream and lust!
tennesseeredabout 2 years agoThis is a nice, gentle closure on a most unusual LW story. The repartee between Stephen and Harry was light-hearted and literate but with an undercurrent of melancholy. I sense nostalgia for things that were and things that were never-quite. All ten chapters were a satisfying read. I think you made the right literary choices that maintained consistency within your characters. Dittos on the Wayback Machine, Peter. Thanks for the shout out. 5*
