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Click here"I'll try, Harry," I said. "'Stephen's' profession is kind of closely connected with parts of the plot. What plot there is. I'll see what I can do.... What's the third request?"
Harry had this odd look in his eyes. "Next time you set the Wayback Machine for the late 1960s... invite me to come along, will you?"
A great start, excellent first few chapters, but then for me it all fell apart.
And it ended with a very disappointing finale.
I came of age in the sixties and.had no trouble seeing this as true. In fact as survivor of several attempts at creating a lasting extended marriage I could identify with several scenes.
I have to admit, after chapter 2 I just skipped to chapter 9 to see if it was worth reading. It wasn't. I got the entire plot, and didn't have to wade through all the boring badinage and utopian open marriage drivel. But thanks for the effort.
Hi Peter, an innovative and creative way to end your first excellent series of lovely stories. Using this chat to put forward your approach to writing was also nice. Great work and I hope we see more from you soon, Andy