All Comments on 'New Friends'

I don't care either, great story 😜

Stupidity runneth amok. None of them should be married plus the fact that they're just lousy people.

Voyeurs all. Good writing.

A good story spoilt by careless mistakes. You need an editor, in several places it wasn't clear which wife you were referring to and the were some missing and misspelt words.

A few errors in the grammatical sense. The plot is out of the typical basket of often used devices aimed at establishing an opportunity for a orgy. This is more a group sex story than a Loving Wives one. Sure, there are married women, and you would expect them to be under the circumstances of their visit, but for this to work they don't need to be.

You constantly called the girls by the wrong name. Very confusing.

I have a hard time believing a husband would swap his 30 something year old wife for a 50 something year old wife , even for a night. Nope. Only in delusional fantasies. Ah. And here we are.

Even editing wouldn’t help this.

You from Nickerson ?