All Comments on 'New Girl at the Old Blue Ball Pt. 01'

Great story, well written and very sexy.

Looking forward to the next story, I imagine this is based on your own experience or fantasy. Suggest you provide some details in your biography to give readers a clearer picture of you the author

Thank-you Biggalute, that's very kind.

Mark become John but other than that a good story.

Thanks for pointing that out Anonymous, I'll put an edit in.

Newventure, I think I'd rather keep my details to myself for now, I'd rather the stories stand on their own. Glad you're looking forward to reading about Katie's next performance at the Old Blue Ball.

I'm hoping this is just the first part of the story. What happened next???????

hi Reddleman, i loved the story and imagined myself as katie loving it like she did. i am shy discreet and private in the real world but i would like to think that on the stage or in public erotica i would be myself and love the feeling of being sexual all over to all. i look forward to more of your stories because i liked the way you made it great love lisa xx (privategirl973)

I loved it. Well done. Can’t wait to read more stories. Beth x

Nice idea, nicely done. There's a story on here called Almond Street by Wanderer49 about a girl's first nude photoshoot that's based on the same idea of a woman exposing her body and getting off on the excitement.

Great stuff! I’ve been to lots of striptease pubs in London in my time and your story brings lots of memories back. Hopefully the Old Blue Ball offers the kind of “private dances” I used to enjoy!

This is an incredible story! I masturbated 5 times today while reading it. This is my greatest fantasy and I love how you expressed it here, it really resonated with me. Good job!