All Comments on 'New Kingdom: American Court Ch. 13'

This chapter has made my day. I can't wait to see what is up in Europe with the human girl.

Sexy and powerful. Gotta love it. There were a few scene/time transitions that were confusing... Like from the mating scene to the family river scene. I wasn't sure who was talking for a while. There were also some punctuation and spelling errors. But the spirit of the chapter was great. Looking forward to the next.

THIS JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER, AND I HAVE A FEELING THAT THE KIDS ARE GOING TO HAVE ONE HELL OF A STORY ALSO

Loved the way Gabe took total control with his extra strength and power and then playing with the kids we see the more tender lovable side of this amazing character! Loved this chapter! From what we have read on Antony he is going to another favourite character in the future chapters I think! Can't wait!!

Somehow I sense a sequel brewing and I'm very excited. Keep the good stuff coming (no pun intended).

Alright, I have to admit I was expecting a mind blowing sex scene after Alena's change, but you can make it up to me by telling Antony's story.

As expected. Seriously, I love this series!

Good stuff, man, good stuff. A bit cheesy with the third creation stuff, but the rest totally outweighs that. I really like Alena and Gabe.

I'm glad they were able to round up the traitors from the rebellion. Hopefully the American court will be ok for a while. The last chapter seemed a little condensed, but still very good. Looking forward to se what the European court has in store, sounds like Antony will be a handful. You have the opportunity to explore some very epic battles with Gabe and Alena's new found badass powers. Hope they get to tear up some Panthragles. :)

Great story! Great story! Great story!

I love this story! You leave just the right amount of "unknown" to keep everyone clawing for more. Don't stop!

For sharing this wonderful story! It's almost two am and I'm starting on your European court. Lol. I'm so hooked!

Think am at my fifth reading and am still charmed...you got a true talent...i was hoping you would have posted a second chapter for the return from exile...please please do continue...

So far this whole series is amazing, you definitely have a lot of talent. Please don't stop, continue making incredible stories.

I see you've started book 4. Good God win the war with auto fill and Proof Read! It is seriously the difference between a lost reader and ***** and more fav hearts. Story so good I'm moving on to book 3 Australia. This story is seriously worth the wading through the Quagmire of misplaced words. Mho

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