by AnotherOldWriter
Nicely written
Well Written!
Love these stories, please continue the adventures
Awesome
Nice job on the series up to this point. Looking forward to more! Thanks for sharing...
I agree, great series, still room for additional parts. Good job.
Waiting to see what's next!
I'd give you more than 3 stars but the editing is mediocre ... constant slipping between 1st and 3rd person, past and present ... sorry!