All Comments on 'New Neighbors'

You can't make people affable if they don't want to be!

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OK.....And?

There's no neat little resolution (lots of short stories are like that) to this story. It presents a tense situation between neighbors that might or might not escalate into something more serious, leaving the reader to wonder.

Where you going with this? I guess the suspense you've created with the utter ambiguity of the circumstances will bring me back IF you decide you haven't gotten bored with your own bad neighbor story and publish a follow up.

Sorry, you’ve given us a scene or two from a story but no conclusion—not even an indication of a second chapter, which might include the conclusion. You have far too many outstanding stories to your credit, so I’m left wondering just what kind of rabbit are you going to pull out of the hat. cd

***Loaded shotgun good idea. Thanks for the read.