All Comments on 'New Roomie Pt. 21'

I have just binge-read all 21 chapters of the New Roomie series, I do feel it needs some more chapters, is there any possibility of some more please?

I think the author completely lost the thread of his own story. What happened to his military reserve training? Where's the girlfriend who went off for 3 weeks in south America with a friend? And just how old is this author. It's written like a 15 year olds fantasy.