All Comments on 'New Years Eve at Daddy's'

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Please write more. Can't wait to hear about her next visit.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

While the writing itself (punctuation, sentence structure, etc.) was good, as far as sex or stroke stories go, you suck as a writer. I mean what the dad did to her was something like 6 or 8 sentences, what the daughter did was all of 4 sentences (and this in 2 separate encounters...). No real details. Almost clinical. One of those "what was the point..." (of even writing this unless your goal was to just start to tease your audience then shut it all down...). 2 stars.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Now2 months ago

Pretty dang good - hope there's more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good erotic story. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

JohnnyyyyyJohnnyyyyyabout 1 month ago

Loved this. Especially the part about her and the ex-boyfriend of her mom. Love to hear more.

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